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8:18 pm July 2, 2014
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Post edited 2:35 am – January 21, 2016 by lydeck
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[glow=blue]A r c h a n g e l I n a r i u s[/glow] - Alias: War – Original Human Name: Iskrin Lydeck + Species: Spirit - Subtype: Kami + Age: Unkown + Sex: Male + Appearance: - Eye Color: Unknown + Human Eye Color: Blue - Height: 7'6'' + Human Height: 6'1'' - Weight: Unkown + Human Weight: 205lbs' + Personality: Inarius bears a “might makes right” philosophy, believing it the duty of the strong to shepherd the weak and the ignorant from their weakness or heresy by strength of arms. Inarius bears an extreme, borderline obsessive hatred for Oni and their kin, and will seek to destroy their kind whenever encountered, regardless of the circumstances. He shoulders himself with the responsibility of purging Oni from the world, and imparting a benevolent protection upon the humans. + Character Theme: ——————————————– D e m o g r a p h i c s + Birthplace: Kanbalar + Home: The North + Language: Spirit + Job: Archangel of War + Loyalties: Mankind, Heavens, House Lydeck ——————————————– I n v e n t o r y + Wealth: 100 + Items: None ——————————————– R a c i a l + Passive: True Form, Exorcism, Aura Sense, Spiritual Nature, Pessiah + Trait: Great Flyer 1 + Angelic Armaments + Slight Transformation ——————————————– T e c h n i q u e T r e e s + Charity I - Bind II, Boost I, Damage I, Fatigue II, Juggernaut I, Luck I, Nullify I ——————————————– T e c h n i q u e s + Pending ——————————————– P r e s t i g e + None ——————————————– S p e c i a l i z a t i o n + None ——————————————– H i s t o r y +The tale of the Archangel of War does not begin in the heavens, but instead within the realm of man. Deep within the snowy peaks of the far north, a prince was born into the frigid lands. First son to the King of the North, Iskrin Lydeck was the heir apparent to the icy tundra of his forefathers. From an early age, Iskrin was instilled with a fierce love and loyalty of both the lands and the people of his father's realm, and came to see each and every one of them as a precious gift to be protected. The people, ranging from the relentless and enduring warrior natives of the northern peaks to the hearty farmers of the northern tundras, grew to love their young prince as he loved them. Iksrin was trained at a young age in the techniques of his forefathers, becoming a formidable combatant in which he used to protect his people and uphold the law. This relationship between noble and people continued throughout the duration of his life. How was the prince's life cut short, and how did he become the Archangel of War? Well, that's a story for another time …
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10:25 am July 4, 2014
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Just a few things: 1. Your homeworld would be Gaia, Eorzea would just be the name of that area. Gaia isn't really all that defined, but your history works for it. 2. You have 8 AP, Heart Attack comes free with sword symbol and can spend those as you like. It's just AP for abilities now, no words. 3. Proficiency would be Sword and Medium Armor. (Bladesman can go with class, I'll be adding a spot that specifically calls for it) 4. Magic Infused may be getting an edit soon. I'm trying to limit all %s I can. Just a heads up, if you don't like the edits when they come we can talk about an exchange. Also, define if he's physical or magical aligned for the bonus. If you have an idea for the ability, feel free to post it with your revision. 5. The words at the very left end can be hard to see. Maybe changing the size of the right box or just adding a few spaces, your call.
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11:18 am July 4, 2014
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All suggested edits have been made. Went ahead and re-spent my AP points as well, hopefully correctly.
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11:31 am July 4, 2014
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All checks out, approved. Feel free to join the event we'll be starting back up when you join.
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4:54 pm July 6, 2014
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Magic Infused ability has changed. It now gives +25 MP per level up and one free level 1 ability. You can change race with no penalty or pick an additional level 1 ability.
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3:55 pm July 9, 2014
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I put your bio up, but the background didn't transfer. I'm talking to dystopia about a solution and I'll try to have it settled shortly.
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10:27 pm July 9, 2014
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I suspect I need to check the kses file (which determines which tags you can use on the pages) and allow you to use the background-image css prop. I'll do that tomorrow, if I have no luck finding it I'll just copy the background over myself and get it setup so it doesn't disspear on you when you edit.
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10:43 am September 27, 2014
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Post edited 3:19 am – September 28, 2014 by lydeck
Since the code is being retarded, here: New right background url: http://i.imgur.com/PzUBw0F.png Updated Bio: G a i u s v a n B a e l s a r - Alias: The Black Wolf + Race: Human + Age: Unkown + Sex: Male + Appearance: - Eye Color: Unknown - Hair Color: Unkown - Height: 6'4'' - Weight: 215lbs + Personality: Gaius bears a “might makes right” philosophy, believing it the duty of the strong to shepherd the weak and the ignorant from their weakness or heresy by strength of arms, but despite this Gaius is not without virtues. He is loyal to his majesty, the Emperor of his kingdom Solus Zos Galvus, and to his trusted lieutenants in the XIVth legion, placing high faith in their capabilities and outrage when they are slighted or defeated. Gaius has strong ideals and an unbreakable determination to achieve his goals. + Organization: None + Home World: Gaia (Eorzea – Final Fantasy XIV) + Current Location: Traverse Town ——————————————– S t a t i s t i c a l + Level: 1 - Experience: 0000 + AP: 0 + Symbol of Power: Sword - Class: Fighter + Heart Strength: 20 - Light Side: 01 - Dark Side: 19 + Total Words: 0000 - Unused Words: 0000 ——————————————– V i t a l s + Stats: - HP: 30 - MP: 4 Total Base [Add] - [12] Strength: 7 [+5] - [4] Defense: 4 [+0] - [4] Magic: 4 [+0] —————————————— T r a i t s & A b i l i t i e s
+ Traits: Brawny (1) + Abilities: - Offense: Sliding Dash (+5 Attack) - Defense: Guard - Support: — - Passive: — + Spells: Cure (+7 Magic) + Summons: — ——————————————– E q u i p m e n t + Weapon: Dream Sword (+3 Str) + Armor: — + Accessory: Power Chain (+2 Str) + Items: Potion (3), Ether (2) + Munny: 200 ——————————————– H i s t o r y + Gaius has no knowledge of how he came to be in this strange world of light and darkness. Back in his own home, however, he is a renown military leader. As one of the generals of the Imperial Army, Gaius served in many campaigns under his Majesty Solus zos Galvus, and through his exemplary leadership, cunning and combat ability, he earned his place as the Emperor's favorite Legatus and the title The Black Wolf. Due to his years of dedicated service Gaius was charged by the Emperor to dominate the subcontinent of Eorzea and bring it under Garlemald's banner. Through subterfuge Gaius turned the populace of Ala Mhigo against their king and struck when the defenses of the city state began to crumble at the prospect of civil war, allowing him to capture the city with minimal bloodshed. Gaius earned renown among Eorzea due to his abilities as a commander and his sensibilitites as governing administrator by ruling the conquered stronghold as an Imperial Viceroy.
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